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The World In Flames
Contributed by
hydra
on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 09:24:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I had a dream the world was burning
A cascade of flames at my fingertips
No one smoldered yet everything became engulfed
A wonderland of heat
Curiosity took me over as my fingertips traced against a wall
Only to find it slowly swallowed by a line of brilliant fire
I had a dream the world was burning
A cascade of flames at my fingertips
No One smoldered yet everything became engulfed
A Wonderland of heat
You were there
We Burned together
No pain, only the beautiful feeling of warmth and safety
Safety in reds and oranges
I had a dream the world was burning
A cascade of flames at my fingertips
I watched us burn together.
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hydra
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2007-10-14 09:24:29]
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Re: The World In Flames
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by Saruchan on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 11:13:14 AM AEST
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| yup i think its kinda dark.....but what a dream! i always remember my dreams, but yours was powerful! |
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Re: The World In Flames
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by -Nik-91- on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 07:54:16 PM AEST
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| i like this poem its really good |
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Re: The World In Flames
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 15th October 2007 @ 09:00:21 AM AEST
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| i can't rememeber any of my dreams but you made it sound so vivid good description and good write |
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