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Watch Me Fall to My Knees
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Friday, 19th October 2007 @ 10:20:58 PM in AEST
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Understand where I am coming from
Listen to where I have been
Hear me beg for you
Watch me fall to my knees
If I tell you that I love you
If I say that I care
When I hold you in my arms
As I stroke your hair
As I kiss your lips
For one brief moment
We become one
This can end at any second
You may be gone
I may die
We might not have had a chance to say our goodbye
A final gaze
Into one anothers eyes
A last tear
Solidifies the cry
Please hear me out
Figure me out
Linger about
Be there when the clouds part
Reveal to me the brightness in your heart
Show me the warmth
Give me your love
I am asking for a chance
I am pleading for a last dance
I offer you all I have
I am willing to part with all I possess
To keep you with me
To have you love me
As I wish
As I breathe
Watch me fall to my knees
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Jyssvw22
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Re: Watch Me Fall to My Knees
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by OneLastTime on
Friday, 19th October 2007 @ 11:09:36 PM AEST
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Re: Watch Me Fall to My Knees
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th October 2007 @ 12:32:58 PM AEST
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My God, jyss!! DAMN! There is such strength inside of weakness and
yet a weakness that lingers within strength, no?
There is a madness to this .. a hurried madness. A maniacal desperation
almost. And yet .. soft and tender and comforting.
this ... just feels .... so bloody vulnerable. It's unbearably humble and so
painfully beautiful. I could write a book on the volumes you
speak ... and still not have any answers. I know nothing. But this moved
me ... in a deep way that touches your skin from the inside out.
Exceptional work, poet.
~Breezy |
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Re: Watch Me Fall to My Knees
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by Anesthetic on
Tuesday, 23rd October 2007 @ 09:41:57 AM AEST
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Wonderful, beautiful, fantastic you are indeed splended at what you do, Keep it up.
~Charli~ |
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