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Lies
Contributed by
TooPhat
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Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 07:29:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Lies, Lies, Lies
How could you lie to your love
Why is it a SECRET that you talk to her
Lie after Lie
Is all I hear and see
While on SILENT she is steady calling you
You Lie
She calls
You Lie
She texts
You continue to Lie all day, everyday
I just don't understand if you love someone so deepl
How could you Lie
All I do is trust, love, honor, and obey and you Lie
I know it, you feel it in my vibe that I know something
But being the wife, lover and friend I am
I deal with your Lies Decit, Dishonesty, and basically your Lies
Why do you Lie?
To the love of your life
Lie, Lie, Lie
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2007-10-24 19:29:56]
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Re: Lies
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 07:42:06 PM AEST
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"I just don't understand if you love someone so deepl
How could you Lie"
It sounds like he doesn't love you at all. It sounds like he's taking you for granted and feeds you the lies because apparently he's been getting away with it for quite some time now and nothing's drastically changed. Very good expressive poem. |
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Re: Lies
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 01:57:51 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. good work! |
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