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Empty
Contributed by
Mama508
on
Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 04:29:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I've given you everything
I've changed so much
Just to please you
And yet...
It's never enough
You alwyas want more
And I keep on giving and giving
I'm almost empty
I need you to give some of me back
'Cause I can't give much more
I'm running low
I need your love
Just a little attention
Just to know that you care too
I'm losing emotion
Losing my heart
My body and my soul
You keep on taking
Without cause, care or caution
But what are you going to take
When I have nothing left to give?
When I become...
Empty
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Mama508
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2007-10-27 04:29:06]
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Re: Empty
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 06:57:01 AM AEST
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Re: Empty
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by law_glen18 on
Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 10:54:59 AM AEST
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| I awake most mornings with this tone of mind and having read this i can truly say i know how it feels to be lost in this state of confusion. This is brilliantly written and i hope that the ratings continue to show this! |
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