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Opening of the door
Contributed by
rhei76
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Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 06:33:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Just a thought that rocks, with an M.
That knocks on doors, in dreams that sweep
With lords and Queens, and angels over me.
The one I long to hear speak
She sinks her teeth,
My flesh breaks to seeth
The sweet pain
& I think I found my sunshine and rain
So sweet the dreams that open doors
With lords and Queens, and new creatures around me.
The one I long to hold and believe
She sinks her teeth
My pain bleeds
The sweet feeling
I found my walls and ceiling
So beautiful and comfortable
The dream that knocks on doors
"................................and son with the opening of the door"
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rhei76
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2007-10-27 06:33:13]
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Re: Opening of the door
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 12:05:07 PM AEST
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There is such a painful beauty in this, or it could be a beautiful
pain; I haven't quite decided yet ... I just love the line,
I think I found my sunshine and rain
So damn poetic and it holds a nuance that leaves me breathless.
There are some brilliant thoughts in here, my friend. And such a
melancholic gentleness that touches the skin from the inside out.
Beautiful ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Opening of the door
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by runawaynameless on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 05:40:19 PM AEST
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I dont know why you would want to write like me... your such a better writer, especially when it comes to stuff like this, I just tend to start rambling. Bleh, one day you will read to me again, ill be damned if you dont!!!!
And to say the least, it really doesnt matter if he was doing it or not. It doesnt matter any more, and I am fine with all of it. errr.... its been a while and I havent had a lot of time, and I know I sort of try and pry info out of you for you to not know this bit of information but there is this guy named Mike... yea, you can see where thats going. Anyway its good to be able to be myself... we went to school together a long time ago and I only seen him a few times till after I started working again. Anyway, I am happy, well, with that, im sort of in a state of shock still. BUT IM ALIVE!!!!!!!! lol, sorry I shouldnt joke, everyones made like the biggest deal out of what happened last night, so I shouldnt joke, though I do believe that was the first time I didnt take what happened very seriously.
I miss you! I love you! I hope you had fun at the halloween party! |
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