|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Mid-Night Rout (2 a.m. and semiconscious)
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 06:06:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
|
I laid down with it
knowing even as I did
that I hadnt even tried to deny it
realizing, as I closed my eyes
in that perfectly horrid moment
of giving in,
that it had only found me
because I had run
too far away.
[Author's note: Perhaps more will come in time... I can't really say (especially given that this was, at best, a semi-conscious endeavor and consciously I don't know if I've the wherewithal to say any more). I only know that right now - it needs to be as precisely incomplete as it might seem. That, oddly enough, is the whole of it.]
Copyright ©
Silent-No-More
... [
2007-10-28 18:06:25]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Mid-Night Rout (2 a.m. and semiconscious)
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 06:27:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
and she writes in her sleep as well.....
well dear heart for being semi awake... this has a great start...
You never cease to amase me.. ( the truth)
hugs
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Mid-Night Rout (2 a.m. and semiconscious)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 12:51:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Giving in - sometimes you get so far away you can't remember why you're running. Hopefully the moment isn't horrid, because that means all our fears are true....
sometimes the words just come eh?
always something to ponder in your words,
mj |
|
|
Re: Mid-Night Rout (2 a.m. and semiconscious)
(User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 03:31:48 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| It seems as if you to have entered a state of fear and loathing |
|
|
Re: Mid-Night Rout (2 a.m. and semiconscious)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 11:32:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love it that this was written at 2am in a semiconscious state.Succinct,it may be,but it has a mighty pull.
Being found because you had run so far away? Now that beauty did it for me,left me haunted and drawn in .
Den
|
|
|
Re: Mid-Night Rout (2 a.m. and semiconscious)
(User Rating: 1 )
by classicfailedhero on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 09:32:16 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| a very nice write- short but no line is wasted- if this is you at semi-consciousness i'd like to see you at your full game |
|
|
Re: Mid-Night Rout (2 a.m. and semiconscious)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 09:28:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I loved this one. Hardly a rout when you captured it in this bullet of a poem! haha
"in that perfectly horrid moment
of giving in"
That's exactly how I imagine it. |
|
|
Re: Mid-Night Rout (2 a.m. and semiconscious)
(User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 09:05:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow really wish i could write like this when i am awake let alone half asleep....
i am so amazed by this write because it describes how ive felt the last few nights when i havent been able to sleep.........my memories seem to find me in the wee hours |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
