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Contributed by
lieinruin
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Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 06:24:17 PM in AEST
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i'm in no mood to put this front on again,
cross me once more, and you'll become another front page headline
casket's closed
the last time anyone saw you was the last time they ever will
his mouth was sewn shut and face was the broken mirror
shattered dreams, shattered face, and a tongue to blame it on
i've been backed into the corner and i'll stop stabbing when you finally stob bleeding
there's no end in sight, and no sight in your ending
draw the curtains, there's nothing left to see here...
Copyright ©
lieinruin
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2007-10-28 18:24:17]
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Re: closed
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by law_glen18 on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 11:06:03 PM AEST
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| Nicely written in the sense that i hope it helped you get you emotions out. |
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Re: closed
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by Amicus on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 02:52:39 AM AEST
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it's pretty obvious this was emotional. but to make it a better poem overall, re-read and fix errors and such.
thanks
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