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Thorns
Contributed by
blackrose233
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Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 03:57:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am the thorns you are the petals of the rose, you make me beautiful but with time you pull yourself away
Your are the eyes I am tears distorting your vision
Youre a clean flowing river I am the rocks blocking your path
You have the grace of a wolf with the sting of a bee and always the swarm to fallow
Im always in your way my weight brings you down
good intentions turn sour thats what always brings you power and while im laying on the floor trying to pass the time once more your out there shining light, joining the world in its everlasting fight
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Re: Thorns
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by aknot on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 04:18:55 AM AEST
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I can identify with this 100%. I feel your pain, I hope everything works out for you. Stay strong...
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