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I Tell Myself Im Done with You
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 04:57:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I tell myself Im done with you
After everything youve put me through
Not only did you break my heart
Oh no, that was just the very start
You fed me lies that I could devour
I thought they were sweet but they were so sour
They stung so deep like shards of glass
And so the pain did surely last
But now youve hit an ultimate low
Get your new lover to deliver the blow
Tell me I was a big mistake
That our love was completely fake
She says you dont need me in your new life
The words cut my heart so deep like a knife
My body is quivering as if I were cold
The things she says are so very bold
I wonder if this is what you really feel
For if it is true I dont know if I can deal
I cant believe you let her hurt me this way
My mind is completely beyond disarray
And so I tell myself Im done with you
After all these things you put me through
But I dont even believe what I say
My love for you just wont go away
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CrimsonTears
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2007-10-29 16:57:30]
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Re: I Tell Myself Im Done with You
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by law_glen18 on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 06:56:02 PM AEST
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| This poem is just... Wow. It had me in its grip. Full of raw emotion it leaves you wanting to read on. The feeling and power behind this poem, together with the knowledge that this experience is something most of us go through at some point in our lives, makes for a really good poem. All the best to the author, never lose hope |
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Re: I Tell Myself Im Done with You
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 09:20:46 PM AEST
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uh huh, I can relate.
Awesome, powerfull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Tell Myself Im Done with You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 10:28:11 PM AEST
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| really good poem! hard hitting, straight to the point. |
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Re: I Tell Myself Im Done with You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 07:55:18 AM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful emotional write.. Its good that you can express this feeling and make such beauitful poetry with it.. I hope you get through this.. but remember there is hope and someone out there for you.. never give up the hope. lovely poem here.
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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