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Please Hold On
Contributed by
law_glen18
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Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 05:01:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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The stress is so hard
It eats my soul
But i'll hang on forever
For i hold Hope
She pushes me away
When she is really sad
To think i cant help her
Feels so really bad
She needs someone who truly cares
Will she realize soon that I'm here
That things may be hard, really tough
But thats not enough to not give her my love
Inside i strain to know what is right
To stay when she says go, to leave her on her own
I sit and i hear her cry so hard
If only she'd let me in surely i could take her pain
I gave her a good day, the very best i could do
When we get home i'm on my own and she's crying too
Sitting quietly i try not to despair
But i listen to her cry and hate myself, unfair
I don't know why she cry's
I feel its me, makes me want to die
I need to be the best so she feels ok
But she is sad though i try everyday
I wish she could tell me when something is wrong
Rather than push me away and listen to some songs
I feel like i can never help
Maybe it is me, would she really want me gone?
But still i struggle, to know what to do
It's not as simple as an i love you
She tells me to listen when she says go
But is that really the right thing to do?
When she is depressed
I worry she will cut
So i fear if i leave her alone
That she'll not be here tomorrow
So here i will sit
Ten meters away
So if she hurts herself
I'll be the first to react
My presence is dragging her down
I ask for a smile i get a frown
Am i the center of all her pain
I don't want to see her hurt again
But what can i do
I'm to messed up myself
I need to know she feels love
But can i truly help?
The center point of a revolving circle
Can't speed up can't slow down
Just do the best i can for how i feel
I just wish i could save her, I'm here, I'm real
I love her so, its so hard to go...
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Re: Please Hold On
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 09:38:00 PM AEST
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This is really great writng.
huggs,
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Re: Please Hold On
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 08:07:30 AM AEST
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A moving piece, crafted with genuine depth of emotion.
Good write
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Re: Please Hold On
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 10:55:52 AM AEST
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| As ever, nice done. Keep it up |
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