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I hope I awake
Contributed by
Percursors
on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I stare at the wall
I stare at my wrist
all time has stopped
I just sit in bliss
staring at you
frozen in time
the world has stopped
one step in front of the line
I might miss my friends
I might miss my family
but Im the only one breathing
seeing time through my eyes
maybe somewhere else your living out your life
or maybe your stuck in time
leaving me to be
forever just maybe
would u cry if u were the only one left
I wouldnt
I wont
I like being here alone
if I push up off your chair
would you shatter like glass cuz your cold and stiff like ice
I cross my legs
and tug at my skirt
I sip on my margarita
and laugh at the world
its all mine
money, cars, dreams
that survive on fairy dust and star light
wut a wonderful world if there was only me
no one to bother
no one to see
no one to hate me
but there is one
one in my dreams
maybe Ill find him
his glass body
now that theres only me
I found the one I never met
to find his tears frozen on his mothers checks
holding her tight as they both faded away
I caused so much pain
but whats it worth
for me to be happy
his pain
stopped in time
or my suicide
lost in life
will things be like this forever
can I reverse the pain I held so deep
for so long
instead of dying when It all got released, all my dreams
time stopped
time frozen
time lied and showed my what I didnt want to see
so much hate
so much pain
a tear runs down my face
I didnt mean to do this to you my unknowing love
and then it rained
and then I cried
and then I prayed
maybe this isnt such a good day
I hope I awake
and its all a dream
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Percursors
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2003-03-06 04:30:00]
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Re: I hope I awake
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 08:15:26 AM AEST
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This was good , I really enjoyed this poem, Sometimes we all feel like we are the only ones left. and we question ourselves over and over. But with time the pain does go away.
A great write. |
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Re: I hope I awake
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 02:05:57 PM AEST
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WAKE UP!!! WAKE UP!!!
:::::pinches you::::::
Yes......you are awake....
for you couldn't have expressed such
beauty on paper!!!! :-)
Nice Job!!!!!
Angel always....Godspeed! 0:-) |
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Re: I hope I awake
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 01:12:26 AM AEST
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Love it...
Amy |
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Re: I hope I awake
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by nikkie on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 04:52:48 PM AEST
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| U know....U say in your note at the top jus to coment on it and atleast say i love it or i hate it...but im not jus comenting bcuz u say so im comenting bcuz its really good!! We sumtimes feel that things are real even when we dream until we wake up bcuz i know I've been there. I've dreamt about things and thought that they were really real! We figure it out when we wake up. I think u've wokn up! Great write..Nikkie |
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