|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Count to Ten
Contributed by
Alienwolfetngu
on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 04:48:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Once more my tears wave goodbye.
A loose gesture among others.
I cope, count to ten, return normality.
Salt dries but reflects the day we said hi.
One through ten, way its always been.
Each count a plea, save the selfish me.
Painted across my pupils gaze, the smile.
Which will never cease to amaze, the heart.
Love is a frugal toddler with a toy.
Used up, broken, scratched, neglected.
Bottom of the chest, dust blankets, cozy.
Six, stop to breathe, jealousy shutter, coy.
One through ten, ten, I knew it then.
Each count a plea, please let go of me.
The scar complex, years to cover, happy.
Pain laments the present, its over, birthday.
Once upon a time, it felt so right.
Once upon a time, I cried all night.
I count, one through ten. Stopped, wonder.
Never tried to go to eleven. A mere second more.
Copyright ©
Alienwolfetngu
... [
2007-10-31 04:48:47]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Count to Ten
(User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 05:40:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| really different kinda write very good very heart felt and maybe once try to get to eleven its worth it |
|
|
Re: Count to Ten
(User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on
Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 10:22:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i liked it...i liked it even more backwards. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
