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The Other Side
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 11:56:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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So lost am I in a strange world Afraid to breathe Afraid to make the slightest movement Crossing the deepest ravine on a bridge of twisted vines I see each botanical cable laid out before me Some spots there is simply nothing but clouds.. I hate to think what dislodged those steps Looking up and out I see you standing on the other side Just waiting... You know I am afraid of heights Each step I take is such a daunting task. I can't turn around, now The past is behind me Now, it's all been done... Reach out for me, my friend and I'll take your hand when I reach the other side
9/07 Laura Howell Horner
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Re: The Other Side
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 01:57:43 PM AEST (User
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Sis,
this said alot... the steps, not turning around or lookin back...... alot said here... Lots below the surface. Loved the picture too..
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Re: The Other Side
(User Rating: 1 ) by wordsy on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 10:22:14 PM AEST (User
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A wonderfully woven metaphor for life my well worded friend.
A beautiful read.
as always,
wordsy. |
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