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PAIN AND HATRED
Contributed by
drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate
on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 01:03:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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CAN I DIE
CAN I CRY
DO I WALK AWAY AND SAY GOODBYE
DO I LOVE YOU EVEN THOUGH YOU HATE ME
DO I STAY ,JUST WAIT AND SEE
DO I MOVE ON ,DO I GO AWAY
WILL IT HELP IF I SIT AND PRAY
DO YOU LOVE ME DO YOU LEAVE ME
DO YOU JUST SET ME FREE
CAN I BREATH CAN I FEEL
IS THIS LIFE I SEE SOMETHING REAL
IS IT FAKE LIKE YOUR IMPLANTED BREASTS
DO WE HAVE TO FIGHT FOREVER ,CAN WE TAKE A REST
DO YOU LOVE ME , DO YOU EVEN CARE
AND WHAT'S WITH THAT EVIL STARE
I'M LETTING YOU GO
SO NOW YOU KNOW
JUST WALK AWAY ,GET LOST
I DON'T CARE ANYMORE ,I CUT MY COST
ONE LESS MOUTH TO FEED
NO MORE MY HEART WILL BLEED
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Re: PAIN AND HATRED
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 02:15:37 PM AEST
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Painful and heartbreaking to read..
A good write, expression and flow well done.
At times it is best to just walk away... painful as it is.
Goodbye hurts but is a different hurt than stayin in the line of fire that does ones soul in.
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Re: PAIN AND HATRED
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 09:22:12 AM AEST
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