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Contributed by
Adreana
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Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 06:45:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've been thinking about how you make me feel
Got me wonderin' if the world 'round me is real
Cuz only in my dreams do I smile this way
Only you can turn my dark nights to day
I'm just waiting to wake up to you
To find out if what I've been dreaming is true
I'll hold you tight and refuse to let go
Make your hands touch my body, smooth and slow
I've been saving all this lovin', burning low inside
Crouched behind my secrets, happy just to hide
Waiting for a hand to pull me from my own demise
Someone who will look straight into my eyes
Then you walked right in, without knocking
Taking my heart hostage without even talking
This humbling sensation has got me kneeling
I fully submit to this wonderful feeling
Copyright ©
Adreana
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2007-11-01 06:45:49]
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 04:32:35 AM AEST
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A beautiful work of romantic espression by the heart. Lovely coalition of emotions . . .
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