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Some Random Thoughts
Contributed by
Chaos666
on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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In a dark place within me
I watch my life go by
I watch my actions
I watch my decisions
I wonder how I got here
This pit of failure
I tried to do the best I could
I'm stuck in a rut
Here mulling over whether to live or die
Drugs and drinks comfort me
For only a while
Then it's back to hell
I cant take any more letdowns
This is the end....
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Chaos666
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2003-03-06 07:00:00]
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Re: Some Random Thoughts
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 12:10:15 AM AEST
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I liked this very simple and to the point. I can relate to this a bit. Keep on writing.
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Re: Some Random Thoughts
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by tawakwan on
Monday, 31st December 2007 @ 06:46:55 AM AEST
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Let it be the end of that boring situation you have. Change is good. The poem is also good.
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