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Coming back to life...
Contributed by
madhusudan
on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 09:02:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hey how are you..
I'm doing great...life is good...
keep in touch...take care
Did you just think of me again...
do I still matter to you?
do you not have someone else now,
Am I not an after thought?
People still ask me what happened;
I say I don't know, but all I do know is;
you entered my life, reached my heart,
plucked my heart and threw it away.
And all I ask for is my life...
the one you snatched away;
I'm sick of crying....
I'm glad I'm not drinking....
I wish I had it in me to tell you;
"Excuse me, but you are in my way"
and to shout out aloud -
"I can get someone better than you"...
But I am weak and hurt;
and I know I cannot wait longer,
I have to grow stronger,
taller, better, faster, smarter.
And there are things I will cherish;
You touched me in ways no one ever could.
but its time I go away'
Its time to say goodbye....
And everytime I move away I get your mail:
Hey how are you..
I'm doing great...life is good...
keep in touch...take care
Copyright ©
madhusudan
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2007-11-01 21:02:42]
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Re: Coming back to life...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 09:47:16 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. Completely relate able. Keep up the good work ^^ |
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Re: Coming back to life...
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by Adreana on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 01:41:05 AM AEST
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| Honest and real. I dig it. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Coming back to life...
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by brew on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 01:28:11 PM AEST
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To the point bleek of things.......bravo
always be that way
brew~ |
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