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Frost on Heart
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 12:41:54 AM in AEST
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Icy words spoken in haste
Her whole life seems a waste
No strength for a new start
What she has is frost on her heart
How has she come to this place?
Looking back at decisions she traces
Choices made that were wrong
People echoing the same song
Broken down she cries in her room
Knowing He will be coming home soon
And of the drama she will have a main part
Adding to the frost on her heart
Can she dig deep to the spring she left behind?
Can she still courage and strength find?
One last decision she makes to go
How or to where she does not know
Packing all she owns in a battered suitcase
She plans to slip away without a trace
Starting a clean page on her life chart
Slowly the frost starts to melt on her heart
As the years pass she has come to know
She was right to finally pick up and go
She has opened up and given love room
Now summer flowers in her heart blooms
Take the advice of this woman sage
Move on and start a new lifes page
Dont lie stagnant accepting the darts
That, tend to build frost on your hearts
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2007-11-02 00:41:54]
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Re: Frost on Heart
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 05:30:12 AM AEST
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OMG Shari,
this I loved so much. It is so true! As always your words, poetry, flow everything is byond compare and above the charts of double 5's
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Re: Frost on Heart
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 07:50:49 AM AEST
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Shari,
So good to "see" you posting...and what a lovely post it is. Superb write. You've strength and character, my friend. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Frost on Heart
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 12:19:32 PM AEST
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Luv that title.
Awesome write, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Frost on Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 02:32:07 PM AEST
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Shari, the thoughts you've mastered are exceptional. And as always,
you are the queen of great advice. Your pieces always seem to end
with that, "to avoid this, try this" kind of thing ... and it's amazing!
Wonderful story telling within a beautiful rhyme and metre.
As Laura stated, glad to "see" you posting. =)
~Breezy
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Re: Frost on Heart
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 08:11:28 PM AEST
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awww shari
that is such an awsome write.
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