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Tick, Tick, Tick
Contributed by
mikebuchter
on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 12:37:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Internally I hear the sound,
When I woke up no one was around,
Tick, Tick, Tick
I try to speak but no words come out,
My parents walk in with a terrified pout,
Tick, Tick, Tick
The cries of my wife,
It gave us new life,
Tick, Tick, Tick
That joyous sound,
Thank God Im alive
Tick, Tick, Tick
Copyright ©
mikebuchter
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2007-11-02 12:37:46]
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Re: Tick, Tick, Tick
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by brew on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 01:19:52 PM AEST
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Nice, sweet write
Hope all can go tick,tivk, tick for you
brew~ |
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Re: Tick, Tick, Tick
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 01:57:39 PM AEST
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| An excellent write.. |
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Re: Tick, Tick, Tick
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 04:18:08 PM AEST
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Interesting write, this could have several meanings. Nice job.
Michelle |
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