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A mornings word 110207
Contributed by
wordsy
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Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 11:06:10 PM in AEST
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All these bits and pieces
that have fallen in disrepair
as a broken heart unleashes
all the sadness and despair
upon the fartherest reaches
as slowly it pervades
upon my soul it leaches
how completely it invades
as the tears that seem to ever flow
down upon my face
to find themselves ever so
oh so out of place
and there the pain and sorrow
seem to have taken root
and upon my emotions borrow
to pillage there and loot
all these bits and pieces
that have fallen in disrepair
as a broken heart unleashes
all the sadness and despair
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2007-11-02 23:06:10]
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Re: A mornings word 110207
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 12:59:10 AM AEST
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Sad words you've penned, my friend. Nothing more painful then a broken heart. Your last stanza really got me. Well penned.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: A mornings word 110207
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by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 01:52:25 AM AEST
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| well written..its so brief and succinct in its depiction of deep sat sadness. |
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Re: A mornings word 110207
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 02:19:21 PM AEST
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Oh wordsy how I wish I could just cuddle up your heart.
Show a sunshine filled with hope and give you a fresh start.
Your words of pain do tear apart my soul and wish for you.
A brighter hope that love will bring a wonderous love so new.
Do not despair have faith dear one it's just another day.
In any given moment, things could go another way.
Faith and peace. ND |
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