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There Goes My Baby

Contributed by honey56 on Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 05:51:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

There goes my baby
Holding hands with
Another..

Under silhouette of the
Stars..

Holding her the way he
Once held me..

There goes my baby in
Wrapped tightly in another
Arms..

I wonder if he know how
My heart is breaking..

For he once held me the
Way hes holding her..

I wonder if he even care?

There goes my baby

While my heart is burden
So low..

Oh Lord how I wish he still
Loved me..

But now he in the arms of
Another..

Under the silhouette of the
Stars..

Where our special place once
Was..

Ah, there goes my baby leaving
Me all alone..

Under the silhouette of the stars

Copyright © honey56 ... [ 2007-11-03 05:51:43]
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Re: There Goes My Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 09:26:43 AM AEST
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such a sadly beautiful poem, its simplicity reallt brings out the raw emotion of pain and vulnerability.
a few grammar tweaks are needed but other than that, great job.

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