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Remembering (Thoughs Of You)
Contributed by
exiled
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Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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Remembering (Thoughts Of You)
remembering the times I used to know,
remembering hou you could always show,
me how to do this,
showing me what it means,
to be a man, in this life of suffering,
remembering..........
as everything seems to fade,
the curves of your face remain,
it's comforting,
a break away from the pain.
as the moonlight settles over me,
I can finally see,
how my life, my pride is breaking,
remembering..........
now the night turns into day,
yet your face still remains,
why is this,
why can't I see,
remembering..........
why do these things run through my mind,
can someone please give me a sign,
what must I do, what are these thoughts,
of you...............
remembering the times I used to know,
as everything seems to fade,
as the night turns into day,
I break away from the pain,
with these thoughs of you.....
thoughts of you.....
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Re: Remembering (Thoughs Of You)
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 06:01:04 AM AEST
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a very haunting write. i like your style. thank you for sharing, keep them coming pls.
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Re: Remembering (Thoughs Of You)
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:44:19 AM AEST
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Very good write, deep and strong, I like it.
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