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Black Pearl
Contributed by
wizard
on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 03:33:10 PM in AEST
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A treasure cultivated on a tropic shore, born from sunsets
and sea breezes... her beauty seducing the ocean air.
Whilst she sleeps the moonlight dances upon the sea,
and for a moment the night seems eternal.
The sun rises with a smile, knowing that when she wakes
theyll together illuminate all that is dim; each flower stealing
a hint of her beauty, butterflies visiting each petal, spreading her sweetness;
the white sand embracing her warmth all that can love falling for her.
Her tomboyish ways not enough to halt her efflorescence, as
a lustrous, silky sheen is formed. It is her very way that makes
this paradise what it is. Swaying palms wave to her across oceans
and islands, hoping to be graced with her presence one day.
An incidental glance upon a page and her beauty is revealed;
enticing lips as full as any moon, a stellar smile sparkling brighter
than any constellation, iridescent eyes that could shame any rainbow
all that one could wish for, and so much more.
and his heart quietly waits.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2007-11-05 15:33:10]
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Re: Black Pearl
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 07:01:47 PM AEST
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This is a masterpeice of beauty. It's very powerfull and touching.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Black Pearl
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 01:36:02 AM AEST
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Absolutely spectacular write. A true descriptive
melody of beauty flowing out. Loved it. |
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Re: Black Pearl
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by catz77 on
Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 06:28:21 AM AEST
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oh my gosh
this is beautiful
i've been gone for so long i almost forgot what a great poet you were |
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Re: Black Pearl
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd August 2008 @ 01:21:31 PM AEST
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Each word was delicious and flowing with terrific imagery. I enjoyed it all the way through, but the emotion slammed into me when I got to the last line. Whew. It's so very humbling.
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