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Goodbye My Love
Contributed by
True
on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 07:32:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Slit my wrist
To match the color of your lips
Drain out the blood
So Im as empty as I feel
It drips into the river
Where she often gets a drink
Drink my blood vampire
As I die
Falling to the ground
Staring at the sky
Curse the heavens
They remind me of your eyes
The knife that killed me
Was not made of sharpened steel
You stabbed me through the heart
With broken shards of love
So goodbye my love
I go to eternal sleep
Where I will dream of you
My angel of death
Copyright ©
True
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2007-11-07 07:32:32]
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Re: Goodbye My Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 11:16:11 AM AEST
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wow girl.. this is some dark stuff from you.
Your starting to write along my subject lines
which worries me kinda. lol. This was fantastic though. I loved it. I can't single out any one verse becuase they are all outstanding. I've been inspired once today and this poem from you makes it twice. I think it's time I tried something again. Awesome poem , truly , doug |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 02:11:37 PM AEST
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chilling and dark I liked this
Michelle |
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