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Shattered
Contributed by
law_glen18
on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 10:18:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Drowning in my sorrow my heart now broken
Even the stars cry for a soft word spoken
And the sea it rises without a sound
The sound of heartbeat lost as it crashes down
How the world must drown, without a sound
Deep in these eyes cannot any of you see
Empathy and Tranquility have both given up on me
A simple fall although a long way down
The tide now turns me upside to drown
How the air so valuable now so hard to find
Death is a friend although rare to visit
Eating his way through the Earth to get it
At the light of day he then will hide
The cloud now rings at eventide so my dear hold on for the ride
How the air smells dark as we fade to crimson
Doctors have gathered around the large bed
Examining a large protrusion from out of the head
At first diagnosed as a semi large lump
The know not of the bullet that forged this hump
How the sun has set to a passing soul
Do you know of a time when the world was still
Everything now a struggle no way uphill
Another rock for my stony bed
Thank you cruel earth I think Im better off dead
How ironic the thunder now rings out
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2007-11-07 10:18:14]
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Re: Shattered
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 11:46:22 AM AEST
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i think that this is amazing.
very powerfully written.
good job =) |
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