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Essence of Her
Contributed by
justakid
on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 01:03:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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White clouds mask blue sky,
their silhouetts land
where you lie.
Their gaze rests, upon flawless face.
A clear indication
of where elegence graced.
From behind these clouds
a luminous orb,
begins to arise,
beneath its surface,
malcontent and envy lie.
No others have dared to try
to challenge this essence of beauty
that rests in the sky.
As its brilliance intensifies,
you stand tall with fixed eyes.
As you strengthen your gaze
the sphere slowly dies,
its beauty is gone
and in your hands,
it lies.
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justakid
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2007-11-07 13:03:41]
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Re: Essence of Her
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 01:34:59 PM AEST
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You might be just a kid on the inside but this write shows mucho wisdom.
Also it's beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
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