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Soul's Cartographer
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 05:54:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It hurts so much
to see you cry
feels as if my breath
has been stolen and,
at any moment, my love
my heart shall stop,
and I would surely die
When you love someone
as much as I do you
it is impossible for
clear thinking to occur
One must bravely follow
their heart for...
it is the compass...
the soul's cartographer.
9/07
Laura Howell Horner
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2007-11-08 05:54:26]
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Re: Soul's Cartographer
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 05:59:17 AM AEST
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wow such a beautiful expressive heartfelt write. lovely work here.
rock on,
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Re: Soul's Cartographer
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 12:41:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful sweet and beautiful and those tears the two of you have shed have been priceless in many ways....... bitter- sweet per say huh??
Sis I wish you golden pathways now..... my the leaves of fall stay colorful and the spring of your marriage bloom and fill you both now and forever more...
I loves you tons and tonsssssssssss
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Re: Soul's Cartographer
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 04:07:45 PM AEST
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Aawww laura this is a beautiful write.
you did an awsome job
hugs sis
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Re: Soul's Cartographer
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 04:54:46 PM AEST
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Hey sis,
This is deeply touching.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Soul's Cartographer
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 11:42:10 PM AEST
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Yes,Laura,the hurt of those we love is greater than our own,and I suppose that's how it should be.The heart is the soul's cartographer?I really like that,great one.
Problem is we all keep facing the storms round Cape Horn,just to make sure we have it mapped correctly(well I do)
Den |
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Re: Soul's Cartographer
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 09:41:33 AM AEST
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This is one of those poems I wish I would've written. Elegant title, followed by sweet words, flowing so smoothly.
Well done,
Do take care,
David |
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