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I Sent You Away In A Envelope
Contributed by
law_glen18
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Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 11:50:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I woke in the morning
Todays a good day
You open your eyes
It all goes away
You wake up screaming
Why always at me
All i'm doing is loving you
You must be blind to my needs
To you i gave you all
My Soul, My Heart, My Life
You cut it out through my back
With a very sharp proverbial knife
I saw it coming all along
But was soft to your attacks
If i have learned one thing from you
Its to always watch my back
I've had it with the story's too
But mainly all the lies
The ones when you were cheating on me
As i lay crying every night
I can barely recover from this blow
It was only a few days ago
But if i am right, then this is true
It's not been long but I'm over you
Two years ago i first saw your smile
I hope i wont see it for a very long time
Becase i'm sticking the stamp and letting you go
I'm sending you this broken heart, i've got another of my own
"May you be kicked in the butt by a rabid donkey"
(lol)
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Re: I Sent You Away In A Envelope
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 12:04:43 PM AEST
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Very angry but deservingly so... i hope you found another to give your heart to!
Great poem! |
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Re: I Sent You Away In A Envelope
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by law_glen18 on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 12:11:41 PM AEST
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I wish i could say yes, but it literally was jus 2 days ago. Not missing her as much as i thouht i would. It's a very hard thing and i hope knowone has to feel this kind of punishment.
All the best all!!! Thank you for reading!! |
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Re: I Sent You Away In A Envelope
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 04:42:09 PM AEST
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Whewww sounds like you haven't been having to great of a time. Your expressed your feelings well, it is good to get that anger out. A good write and the ending cracked me up.
Be free be free
Michelle |
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