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the long road
Contributed by
jan_oskar_hansen
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Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
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The Long Road.
A new motorway stretches ominously
through a green landscape that looks
like a petrified ocean, alas hares dont
know traffic rules and when chased by
their archenemy the fox, run unseen
paths that cross the asphalt road and
both get squashed. Dark spots a bit of
fur there is no difference between a fox
or a hare the has been run over fifty
eight times. A blood dripping track that
that leads us nowhere faster than last year.
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2003-03-06 14:30:00]
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Re: the long road
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 04:13:57 PM AEST
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Re: the long road
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 02:37:19 AM AEST
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| Always you write with such in your face honesty and I like it. |
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Re: the long road
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:43:35 PM AEST
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Roadkill again!? This is somewhat of a free-verse tutorial, I've found here in your file.
I'll keep reading . . . |
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