|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Bed Of Roses
Contributed by
law_glen18
on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 01:28:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
|
I walk into the room
Smiles shared all around
She lays on the bed
In a blood soaked gown
In her weary arms
Shines a tiny wee light
A pure innocent soul
Showing loud sounds of life
A feeling inside me
Rises up to my chest
The tears fall like candy
In a lolly gift shop
I realize at this moment
I'm the luckiest in the world
To have a wife and sister
And my newborn baby girl
My life now flashing before my eyes
I sit quietly and smile
My little girl grew up real well
And has a life now of her own
I bless life for the moments
That we get to share
And on my final deathbed
I'll be glad that they are here
"In the most wonderful places love is found..."
Copyright ©
law_glen18
... [
2007-11-09 13:28:52]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Bed Of Roses
(User Rating: 1 )
by law_glen18 on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 04:02:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Please feel free to comment, i appreciate the feedback. As always my work is always a work in progress and any hints tips etc are very useful!
Cheers! |
|
|
Re: Bed Of Roses
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 04:02:48 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very powerfull, touching write.
Huggs,
emy |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
