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Alone
Contributed by
angel_facing_judgement
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Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 01:10:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Standing in a crowd, I knew you were holding my hand.
Without a sound you effortlessly let go,
tossing me into a sea of people, strange and unknown.
If it were ever bright, the sun shown dark this day,
cold and unfeeling.
I screamed your name in a silent cry,
drowned in the murmur of others dreams.
Your unfaithfulness has caused my death,
ever dreaming in still shrouds of dark.
I loved you with all the passion a dead woman could,
and you never, not once, thanked me for it.
Instead I was left alone.
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Re: Alone
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 01:38:20 PM AEST
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Very strong, creative write even in it's sadness.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Alone
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by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 02:21:59 PM AEST
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| Horrible thing when that happens. You made a great write out of it though. |
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Re: Alone
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by classicfailedhero on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:55:35 AM AEST
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| nice emotional write |
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Re: Alone
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 11:43:52 AM AEST
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There is a haunting sadness in this that stays in the mind.
Well written
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