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Love
Contributed by
Amicus
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Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:23:23 AM in AEST
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Murder, murder, murder
Surrender, just surrender
No one can fight off love
Not even with help from above
She'll kill you just to end it
Don't even think she'll give a ****
Just another name off a song
Acting like you didn't do anything wrong
See the pain that's in his eyes
Coming from the photo, that'll make you cry
****** lie
One sad word, just suicide
He couldn't reach the end
So how'd he pull the trigger then?
A mix of stupidity and hate
His life is over, but choose her fate
Suicide, suicide
One more voice, and I'll ******* die
'Cause no one can fight off love
Not even with help from above
Load him up full of heroin
He couldn't move but just then
His body, which couldn't move
Got up and sent him just one smooth
Load the story up with more heroine
No one suspects the pleading wife
But we all see what happened then
When something ended his life
You said before he tried to die
There's only the question, why
Why would he do it for something he didn't need
Something that made his brain, tragically bleed
One word rings through the darkness and despair
SUICIDE
Sink to my knees and start to cry
All from one drunks stupid lie
Love
Couldn't do it herself, save her shame
Love
Is to blame
Put her back where she came
Hell
It's to nice for Satan itself
Knowing everyone hates you
Is just as well
Copyright ©
Amicus
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2007-11-13 10:23:23]
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Re: Love
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by Cupid on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 12:10:04 PM AEST
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Wow, Amicus.
Your view on love seems to be, well, tragic...
I liked this poem a lot.
It packs a lot of power...
Keep writing, my friend!
And good luck in love, too! |
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Re: Love
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by willwinuk on
Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 05:27:21 AM AEST
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| Very good :) |
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