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Wife (the early years)
Contributed by
gribbs
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Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 01:36:49 AM in AEST
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Total devotion is what I feel for you,
Youre on my mind in my waking hours, and in my dreams in sleep
Total devotion Id die for you
My heart aches so much for you, it makes all other loves seem cheap
Total understanding I have learned from you
Your compassion runs far and wide with a power none other can match
Total understanding is so rare in life
As you look at the troubles in the world around you, your minds door is free at the latch
Total woman youre such a rare breed
Your love for me makes me feel like the man I have always longed to be
Total woman I hope I am worthy
My life is totally devoted to you
May we settle into our golden years watching the sun set on the sea
Keith W. Saunders
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Re: Wife (the early years)
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 05:17:31 AM AEST
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| what a touching piece, such emotion pouring from every word, great write.. |
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Re: Wife (the early years)
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 15th November 2007 @ 07:37:47 PM AEST
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Such a powerful poem. I was moved by it.
Great write!
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