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I Finally...
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 07:48:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Everything around me was just ordinary and normal
Until the day I got to know you
I know something was extraordinary
I felt something special
I dont even know your full name then
I knew nothing about you
But all I want was just to be where you are
Listening to your stories
Laughing at your jokes
Looking just at you
Hoping for a moment there
Youll know of my existence
The existence of someone silly
Someone so far
Who knows nothing about you
But was totally attracted to you
As I laughed at my silliness now
I finally found the way to love means not to own
I finally understand to love is to let go
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Re: I Finally...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th November 2007 @ 03:08:19 AM AEST
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Oh hun, what a lovely, eye-opening piece. The last line is incredibly
touching. I'm sure there are an enormous mass of people who've
felt the emotion you describe. Right from the first word on down ..
There was such a soft, warm feel to this and yet, a small sadness
at the end. But not a I'm-gonna-cry-forever-and-never-get-over-this
kinda sadness. More like, aw .. how beautifully sad, kinda sad.
(If that makes any sense ..lol)
Great writing. Very emotive. =)
~Breezy |
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