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Afraid
Contributed by
MemeCaroline
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Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 03:08:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Theres no one here to comfort me alone in this big house
And darkness closes in on me like a cat upon a mouse.
The emptiness of all the rooms echo every sound
And down the hall in the master room I hear a heartbeat pound.
I sit alone all huddled up in an old and creaking chair
Eyeing each corner of the room where shadows seem to stare.
Then suddenly at the porch window a silhouette appears
I scream in terror and cry for help as the apparition nears.
Lightening strikes and thunder booms and the white french doors blow wide
But I am rooted to the spot, I can not run and hide.
So I close my eyes and pinch myself to wake from this bad dream
And my crying out for deliverance is but a silent scream.
Then as the clock in the hall strikes one I awake and the noises cease
And now the house is only filled with strangely tranquil peace
.but I am still afraid.
Caroline Smith
Revised on November 22, 2007
Originally written in seventh grade
Copyright ©
MemeCaroline
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2007-11-23 03:08:58]
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Re: Afraid
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 12:23:02 PM AEST
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Very nice write..You truly have a great talent..
Happy Thanksgiving To You & Yours
Blessings..
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Re: Afraid
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 09:55:58 AM AEST
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Well you obviously have a talent for words, maybe she was just in awe.
Sometimes teachers teach, but they forget to learn !!
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