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Wonder (And Nothing More)

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 04:30:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry







He caught me,
The way children catch snowflakes
In the palm of their hands.
And for a moment, the world
Gave itself to the beautiful sort of silence
That accompanies snowstorms
As I dance-floated, fell
And melted into him.
He held me
As if welcoming me home
From a long journey,
The earth falling away beneath us
And the sky reaching down
To wrap us in
The pure white, perfect
Nothing-else of the moment.
The world disappeared
As we disappeared
Into the wonder,
Becoming in that instance
What we will never not be again.
If there was anything but him, just then
I knew nothing of it
And I wanted...
Nothing more.






Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2007-11-23 16:30:20]
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Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 04:49:54 PM AEST
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A beautifull, sweet write.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 05:06:58 PM AEST
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How beautiful.
I wont quote one sentance because there are so many that are full of life and vivid images.

I just cannot choose darn it....... double fives two thumbs up happy wave...... Happy Thanksgiving.

Michelle


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 06:05:09 PM AEST
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Snem,

overcoming my GAY-dar, I read this one out loud (well softly), and it flowed like chocolate. Hoping it's a guy-thing and not a god-thing...
S.


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 06:11:33 AM AEST
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Just in awe....and WOW........what an intense, lovely write.


brew~ Dayna


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by AnenaLynne on Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 07:43:40 AM AEST
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absolutly breathtaking...just no compliment i can give can express how lovely this is
~nena


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 10:22:36 PM AEST
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Wow Snem I think I'm melting away under the touch of your words! So beautiful, so romantic. I'm lost in pure white snowfields. Blissful write!

Dom


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 05:04:52 AM AEST
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Very beautiful and ever so moving, I felt evey word. I have miss YPDC and all the wonderful poets on here, you should be very proud of this write!

hugs
Pix xx


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 09:36:37 AM AEST
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'Becoming in that instance
What we will never not be again'
The above lines are what I like most about this poem,
and though there's plenty to like about it,plenty!
They touch me more deeply.
Though such a wonderful moment is ephemeral,the impact is everlasting.

Den


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 09:53:39 AM AEST
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Wow, Snemmy. You sucked me in. I love this kind of a write because it's tangible and gives you something to both chew on and dream about. Love it. Sorry I've been delinquent.

Be well,
Loende


Re: Wonder (And Nothing More) (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 28th December 2007 @ 09:45:34 AM AEST
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beautifully moving, it is a live breath across the soul, keep writing,

happy new year to you and yours,

love n' hugs nessa




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