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A Redemption Song
Contributed by
honey56
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Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 08:33:59 AM in AEST
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oops
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Behind a grove of trees is
Filled with shadows..
The rays of light shining
From the heaven light.
Through silhouette of the
Piercing light..
The Light,
Shine through cracks
Shadows of souls wanders
Through trails of heaven
Light..
Wanting..
Trying to find their place
From within a world..
Where shackles held their
Souls,
To wander..
Silhouette of shadows of
Faces..
Gently fading..
Evaporating into heaven
Light.
Rejoicing,
Into the grove of trees
Peaceful faces fades gently
Into the heaven light..
Where the redemption song
Is born..
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2007-11-26 08:33:59]
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Re: A Redemption Song
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by Kellros on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 09:07:24 AM AEST
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| Vivid imagery, well done :) |
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Re: A Redemption Song
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 04:12:56 AM AEST
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It still amazes me on this site how so many gems of poetry don't get the acclaim they deserve.
Well here is one person saying "thanks for your words", hope you write many more
Steve |
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