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Frozen
Contributed by
ki
on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 12:52:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Be silent sweet child
Your words fall on deaf ears
Your face hides
What is left of tears
And always you are empty
Still, as a midnight breeze
With eyes that can no longer cry
A mouth that could no longer lie
More special than even you know
Your always empty
So empty that it hurts
Inside where feelings lurk
Inside where you have pain
One step, above insane
Your crazy
Your crazy
Not making any sense
Relaxed, and then your tense
It's screaming from inside of you!
It's screaming from inside of you!
IT'S SCREAMING FROM INSIDE OF YOU !
But it could NEVER hide from you
Your frozen
Copyright ©
ki
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2007-11-27 00:52:00]
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Re: Frozen
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by Jane_Doe on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 05:40:06 PM AEST
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| The beauty of this poem is that it's applicable to so many different situations and kinds of people. Very good job, lovely repetition and rhyming. |
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Re: Frozen
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by Jane_Doe on
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| The beauty of this poem is that it's applicable to so many different situations and kinds of people. Very good job, lovely repetition and rhyming. |
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