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In Laughter Only Silence
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 11:58:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Take me back to places
I know I've been before
Take me back to memories
I've locked behind those doors
Take me to the shoebox
I keep under the stairs
take me through the darkness
To proove that I was there
But never do I see me
Never in the frame
Nowhere is my face to be
No mention of my name
Is it truly me in there
Or some strange illusion made
Is it just a hardend shell
That was bound to fade
So take me back and show me how
My life was ment to be
Somewhere along these lines
I forgot to just be me
For in laughter only silence
Is the sound i cant ignore
the case of sudden deja-vu
like we've met somewhere before
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bigbadblinkybill
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2007-11-27 11:58:41]
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Re: In Laughter Only Silence
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 05:48:42 PM AEST
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| Great rhyming scheme and symbolism. I like this a lot. It's darkly delicate and lovely. |
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