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look, man (he says to me)...
Contributed by
JohnYamrus
on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 03:45:54 AM in AEST
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oops
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look, man (he says to me)
i dont know nothing
about poetry.
never have.
never will.
i cant tell
a quatrain
from a
freight train.
but, if i were
to write me a poem,
id do one
about
that girl
over there.
shes just
bad news
waiting to happen.
yep,
if i ever wrote me a poem,
itd be about her
look
at her
aint she
something?
why,
shes just
just
a thorn
without
the rose.
Copyright ©
JohnYamrus
... [
2007-11-28 03:45:54]
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Re: look, man (he says to me)...
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 04:52:48 AM AEST
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This made me smile...
Great poem!
Happy Holidays To You & Yours..
Blessings..
Honey56 |
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Re: look, man (he says to me)...
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 05:12:32 AM AEST
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| LOL you made me laugh I love reading your writes |
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Re: look, man (he says to me)...
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 01:10:16 AM AEST
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Look, man, I really dig your writing. Loved this. You have such a unique style. Pleasure to read you.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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