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Fragile Heart
Contributed by
killer1whale
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Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 10:53:27 AM in AEST
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They say I'm a pain to be around,
And act like I'm a disease,
They say things behind my back when they think I'm not there,
But with every hurtful word they say,
My heart breaks in smaller pieces,
Until I have nothing but tiny pieces laying on the ground,
I try to pick them up and put it back together,
But every time I get it together,
I hear them keep another secret from me or lie about me,
They say I drive them insane,
But they never stop and that maybe I feel the same,
They are slowly taking my very existence away from me,
And they don't even care,
So tomorrow I will try again to fix my Fragile Heart
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Re: Fragile Heart
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by blackholesun2006 on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 10:55:59 AM AEST
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| nice write but seems you need some better friends cos like they say keep your friends close and enemies closer but look for true friends and thew will reveal themselves from unlikely places you'll see keep on truckin |
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Re: Fragile Heart
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 11:20:14 AM AEST
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Real friends don't treat anyone like this.
They are more than likly jealous 'cause you seem to be a better person for putting up with their crap.
There's no excuse for their behavour.
Walk away from them and the way I see it the loss will be there's and not yours.
Hold your head up and be proud of who you are. You're better off with out friends than to be treated this way.
Hang tuff.
Luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Fragile Heart
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by DieRomantic on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 11:32:31 AM AEST
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Any friends like this, dont deserve you.
Great write, but nonetheless,
You need to give yourself better.
xx |
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Re: Fragile Heart
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by johnnywords on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 05:03:45 PM AEST
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| Well done, but proofread it- you meant to say "but they never stop and THINK that I feel the same"?? I like it. |
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Re: Fragile Heart
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by Rescue on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 01:21:54 AM AEST
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I think everyone else covered the life aspect.
A nice poem, and I think some of us can relate |
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Re: Fragile Heart
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 08:20:11 AM AEST
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I loved the beautiful transition from being there, hearing them, to the world of the writer, picking up the shattered pieces.
Well written, I hope you find true friends to stand by you.
Take care,
David |
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