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Deep Inside
Contributed by
comod
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Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 12:36:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As I look deep inside this soul of mine
Darkness surrounds there is no time
How can I bring back the days
Back to when i had no pains
As I dig deep inside this mind of mine
Flashes of happiness no longer shine
How can I bring them back again
for that little boy has joined the men
As I search deep inside this heart of mine
Emptiness around, its going blind
How can I fill this empty space
With pumping blood that lights up the face
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2007-11-29 00:36:59]
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Re: Deep Inside
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by JohnYamrus on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 04:39:13 AM AEST
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| i think you have a typo in L2, S3...it should read "it's" |
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