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okay, Mr. Death, you win...
Contributed by
JohnYamrus
on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 04:19:05 AM in AEST
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okay, Mr. Death, you win
im not so young and stupid
to think you havent
stacked the deck.
you own
the house.
you make
the rules.
but today
the victory
is mine.
today ive fought you to a standstill.
today
ive got this poem
this glass of wine
ive got
my wife
my books
and over there
ive got
that stinking,
snoring dog.
thats victory enough
for me.
today, Mr. Death,
you lose
and the glory
of the gods
is mine.
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JohnYamrus
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2007-11-29 04:19:05]
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Re: okay, Mr. Death, you win...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 01:43:09 AM AEST
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Hello my new found friend,
I can certainly relate to this powerfull write in my own way.
I flatlined once in the ambulence a few years back. The attendant brought me back.
I figure as long as there is wrting to do then I have a reason to keep on keepin on.
huggs, smiles, peace,
emy
I've started at the beggining of your time here at ypdc and many comments. I find it ironic that no one took the time to comment on this one |
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