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CLOSE MY EYES AND JUST BREATHE
Contributed by
inevitable
on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 01:05:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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She realizes that these snowflakes
make her artificial
but she doesn't care
She is a product of undoing
Something that you'll never know
Just another flavor, like your stale cigarettes
You run your hand through her hair, black rain
Convinced that she is untouchable, a whisper
They marvel her from afar
Little boys intrigued, obsessed
yet too afraid to approach
She fears she will crush them
the delicate flowers
You offer her your world, knowing she hungers
diamonds, white as snow
Blue lines to trace, orange, the colors
fading beneath her breath, little pills
broken into powder, broken like her
Copyright ©
inevitable
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2007-11-29 13:05:28]
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Re: CLOSE MY EYES AND JUST BREATHE
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by conorshawn on
Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 02:38:53 PM AEST
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| this one hits home i batteled with addiction for years. there is a way out. |
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Re: CLOSE MY EYES AND JUST BREATHE
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by ki on
Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 12:30:24 AM AEST
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| wow.thats pretty deep |
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Re: CLOSE MY EYES AND JUST BREATHE
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by Tweeky on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 09:21:11 AM AEST
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A deep write..thought provoking word's.well done .
Claire
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Re: CLOSE MY EYES AND JUST BREATHE
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by Jo16 on
Tuesday, 6th May 2008 @ 02:49:43 PM AEST
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| good poem. im addicted to pills.especially oxys and ive been almost a year sober from them. |
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Re: CLOSE MY EYES AND JUST BREATHE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 08:49:50 AM AEST
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a tragic tale indeed. i can't pretend to understand drugs or their horrific effects. i can only feel sorrow as people fall apart. worst of all, the dealers make a profit from the misery of the users. what a convoluted world we live in.
-Phil |
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