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ACCEPTEZ - MOI
Contributed by
drmpb
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Thursday, 29th November 2007 @ 11:10:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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ACCEPTEZ - MOI by Dr. Mahendra Bhatnagar Tr. Mrs. Purnima Ray
Mes dsirs : Comme les toiles scintillantes Au sein du ciel!
Mes passions : Comme les ruisseaux brillants De la rivire 'Bhagirathi' coulante en vitesse Qui lve des Himalayas!
Mes sentiments : Comme les guirlandes les plus belles En roses rouges Fraches, parfumes et fleuries!
Je vous les offre Avec de l'adoration; la Beaut cleste! Chaque petit coin de mon coeur Est rempli De vos rayons dors et beaux!
Acceptez - moi, , acceptez - moi Mme dans ma vie d'existence terrestre Je vous offre mon amour le plus chaste!
E-Mail : drmahendrabh@rediffmail.com
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Re: ACCEPTEZ - MOI
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cupid on
Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 09:16:30 AM AEST (User
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J'adore cette poeme! C'est tres belle!
Bon travail, drmpb!
Je l'aime beaucoup!
(Je parle francais [un peu] aussi. J'apprends plus a l'universite)
Restez ecrire, mon ami!
(Corrigez-moi si Je l'ai incorrecte dans ma grammaire)
Salut! |
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Re: ACCEPTEZ - MOI
(User Rating: 1 ) by jantra on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 04:06:38 PM AEST (User
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well i usually hate it when people leave comments that just say "nice write" i usually try to leave comments and suggestions for people who could really use it but in your case all i can say is this is truely beautiful. what a pleasure it has been to read your work. you are a true talent |
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