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without you
Contributed by
vikingbrokk
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Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 03:38:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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once upon a time
i thought i knew you
most of the time
i think i do
some of the time
you dont know me
what am i supposed to do?
there once was a time
when all was simple
but now is the time
to forget the past
i hope there is time
to be forgiven
dire is the day without you
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vikingbrokk
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2007-11-30 15:38:14]
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Re: without you
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 11:28:58 AM AEST
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Very wise and touching write.
I like how you jus lay it out there with few words.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles, happy holidays,
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