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What I think about you
Contributed by
smilez101
on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 05:34:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ask me what do i think about you?
Your presence is like
a breath of fresh air
taking over me in the spring time
and if beauty had a scent
it would be named after you
but in reality I'm only suppose
see you on
cold winter nights
but if i could refrain
from exhaling
and still be able to live
it would mean that
your beauty would be a part of me
air is a feeling
and your words
send metaphysical
chills down my spine
i can't think
i cant sleep
you have become of me
in the morning
you are my waking thought
in the after noon
you are my
sitting in math class
looking out the window day dream
and at night you are my weakness
in fear to open my eyes
cause i know if i were to
turn onto this red light
it may never change back to green
If you ask me what I think about you,
If i could see you
know you
touch you
you would be love in the flesh
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Re: What I think about you
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 06:52:47 AM AEST
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| Sounds to good to be real for myself.but--Every Breath You Take Every Move You Make Evey Breath You Take Every Move You Make I Will Be Whatching(sp) You-unless your a visitor of The Grim Reaper and many live sounds like a coffin to not be ever able to feel.As in smells for me its like-Territoriol *****s-it is me and her smell is it.-Black And Blue And Broken Bones You Left Me Here All Alone My Little Piggy Needed Something New-From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: What I think about you
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 08:11:25 AM AEST
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| WOW, am blown away..Excellent poem |
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Re: What I think about you
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by ki on
Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 01:36:04 AM AEST
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| very well expressed!good write! |
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