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irony
Contributed by
silvertears81
on
Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 07:45:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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walking in the sun
when it's pouring in your head
showing off smiles
yet you're hiding your frowns
hurting yourself
when life is just perfect
hearing you tell me you love me
when all i can do is hate myself
crying
without a reason
dead
but still alive
how doeas stainless steal leave stains?
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2007-12-04 07:45:58]
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Re: irony
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by Purple_Cherry on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 03:57:59 PM AEST
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| I love the last line. Very though provoking. Well written, but really, if it's not fiction get yourself help. You may be surprised how many people can sympathize with what you're feeling because they have had similar experience. |
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