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ITS MAD
Contributed by
BEE
on
Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 03:46:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Its Mad
Its hard
When you movin
The movement so fast
Bricks soo high
Money deeper then
The earths core
Wider then the universe
Ima Zombie
From another planet
Nothing can stop me
Im going to make it
Making money aint a thing
Letting my game flow
Just another thing
Lets get real with it
Its all part of life
By Branden Goodrich
Copyright ©
BEE
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2007-12-06 15:46:52]
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Re: ITS MAD
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by JohnYamrus on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 12:13:35 AM AEST
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| you seem to be confusing "than" for "then". this will probably work nicely as a performance piece. it really has no direction or focus, but spoken out loud you can probably hide that fact. |
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Re: ITS MAD
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 06:25:11 AM AEST
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| Michel(SP?)?Mikel(SP?)Mikal(SP?)Mr.Bradbury?or Jason sixandfour?-Run Run Run Run Run Run Taken Your Girlfriend Out Tonight You Better Run-poetry sounds like a smooth cat walk like a snap of the fingers from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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