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Flowers
Contributed by
Scotty
on
Saturday, 8th December 2007 @ 09:04:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The flowers
So beautiful
They may droop and wilt
But they are still flowing with eminent beauty
They are loosing their sweet aroma
But they always have some kind of scent
Everyone sees their external radiance
and there're not many who stop to see
What a complex creature the flower truly is
And what an amazing experience it is
to witness a beautiful rose freshly blooming
Releasing that enchanting aroma into the air
calling out to the bees saying
they are ready for pollination and
waiting patiently to be picked for
some lady of equally radiant beauty
Copyright ©
Scotty
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2007-12-08 09:04:33]
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Re: Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th December 2007 @ 06:12:23 AM AEST
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oh this is so sweet...
i love the metaphor here, and the equally wonderful ending. truly, good job!
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